Fire on the Water

Errata

Introduction

We have taken our unique opportunity to correct errors and to enforce a standard of English usage. We list our changes here. If you see anything that needs correction, please contact the Project Aon Staff.

Errata List

(Title Page) Replaced ‘seastorms’ with ‘sea-storms’. Replaced ‘FIRE ON THE WATER’ with ‘Fire on the Water,’.

(Dedication) Replaced ‘Ryan and’ with ‘Ryan, and’.

The Story so Far) Replaced ‘Darklord armies’ with ‘Darkland armies’.

(The Game Rules) Replaced all occurrences of ‘ie’ with ‘i.e.’. Removed ‘ that you will find in the front of this book. For further adventuring you can copy out the chart yourself or get it photocopied.’ Split the last paragraph into two starting with ‘Through your experiences’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘fall to zero’ with ‘fall to zero or below’. Replaced ‘Chart. (you’ with ‘Chart. (You’. Replaced ‘Items).’ with ‘Items.)’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Action Chart. (ie’ with ‘Action Chart (i.e.’. Replaced ‘14.)’ with ‘14).’. Replaced ‘points.)’ with ‘points).’. Replaced ‘ENDURANCE points and’ with ‘ENDURANCE points, and’.

(Kai Disciplines) Replaced ‘Kai Discipline section’ with ‘Kai Disciplines section’. Capitalized all occurrences of ‘discipline’. Replaced ‘Lone Wolf’ with ‘Lone Wolf’ when referring to the series. Replaced ‘food or’ with ‘food, or’. Replaced ‘Kai monastery’ with ‘Kai Monastery’. Replaced ‘will be of use’ with ‘may be of use’.

(Equipment) Removed the ‘1=, 2=, … ’ in the ‘How to carry your equipment’ section. These were obviously carried over from Flight from the Dark’s random number equipment assignment, which is now obsolete. Replaced ‘Lone Wolf’ with ‘Lone Wolf’ when referring to the series. Replaced ‘two weapons’ with ‘two Weapons’. Replaced ‘slung over shoulder when not in combat otherwise’ with ‘slung over the shoulder when not in combat, otherwise’. Replaced ‘to your total when swallowed’ with ‘to your total, when swallowed’. Added ‘You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.’ in harmony with the Collector’s Edition. Added ‘It cannot be used to increase ENDURANCE points immediately prior to a combat.’ in harmony with the Collector’s Edition.

(Rules for Combat) Removed ‘ on the inside back cover of the book’. Removed ‘ on the last page of the book’. Replaced ‘on the page after the Random Number Table’ with ‘in the back of this book’. Replaced ‘reduced to zero’ with ‘reduced to zero or below’. Replaced ‘points reduced’ with ‘points possibly reduced’. Replaced ‘at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.’ with ‘at which point that combatant is declared dead.’.

(Levels of Kai Training) The Levels of Kai Training section did not originally appear in this book, but has been added for the reader’s information.

(Kai Wisdom) Removed ‘ on the back cover of the book’. Replaced ‘LONE WOLF’ with ‘Lone Wolf’.

(1) Replaced ‘to try and’ with ‘to try to’.

(4) Replaced ‘to try and’ with ‘to try to’.

(8) Replaced ‘Sandsnake’ with ‘sand snake’.

(9) Added a period to the end of the illustration’s caption. Replaced ‘Hammerdal range’ with ‘Hammerdal Range’.

(12) Replaced ‘agreeing a wager’ with ‘agreeing to a wager’.

(15) Replaced ‘Godspeed Lone Wolf’ with ‘Godspeed, Lone Wolf’.

(16) Replaced ‘razor sharp’ with ‘razor-sharp’.

(20) Replaced ‘wharfs’ with ‘wharves’. Replaced ‘Ragadorn bridge’ with ‘Ragadorn Bridge’ to match other occurrences.

(23) Replaced ‘torch-lit’ with ‘torchlit’.

(24) Replaced ‘Fox He’ with ‘Fox. He’.

(26) Added a period to the end of the illustration’s caption.

(27) Capitalized ‘wildlands’. Replaced ‘far), and’ with ‘far) and’.

(28) Replaced ‘useful Items’ with ‘useful items’.

(31) Replaced both occurrences of ‘Lord-Lieutenant’ with ‘Lord-lieutenant’. Replaced ‘lord-lieutenant’ with ‘Lord-lieutenant’.

(34) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(35) Moved the Tracking choice into the first position.

(37) Added a period to the end of the illustration’s caption. Replaced ‘East Bank Walk’ with ‘West Bank Walk’ since you are west of the River Dorn at this stage, though not on its banks; nor does the street go to the river bank, as Section 323 strongly implies that it ends and becomes Lookout Street (cf. erratum for Section 86 regarding ‘Westbank Wharf’).

(38) Replaced ‘rib-cage’ with ‘rib cage’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘spear’ with ‘Spear’ as it is referring to the Magic Spear mentioned in Section 134.

(40) Replaced ‘Lord-Lieutenant’ with ‘Lord-lieutenant’.

(49) Replaced ‘quarters and fighting, often to the death, is’ with ‘quarters, and fighting—often to the death—is’.

(50) Replaced the first word ‘The’ with ‘A’. This is the first time you meet the priest—the introduction to the other coach members comes later.

(56) Replaced ‘chair and’ with ‘chair, and’.

(62) Replaced ‘requires, or’ with ‘requires or’. Added ‘if you possess it’ after ‘Seal of Hammerdal’ and switched the first and second choices to make it clearer that if the reader possesses the access papers, the only way to avoid showing them is to also possess the Seal of Hammerdal.

(63) Moved the Animal Kinship choice into the first position. Replaced ‘sandsnake’ with ‘sand snake’.

(64) Replaced ‘it, their’ with ‘it. Their’. Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position.

(69) Replaced ‘staffbearer’ with ‘staff-bearer’. Replaced ‘Lord-Lieutenant’ with ‘Lord-lieutenant’. Added a period to the end of the illustration’s caption.

(73) Replaced ‘failed Lone Wolf’ with ‘failed, Lone Wolf’.

(75) Replaced ‘Sir, requires’ with ‘Sir requires’. Replaced ‘white pass’ with ‘White Pass’.

(76) Replaced ‘these Items’ with ‘these items’.

(78) Replaced ‘risk drowning’ with ‘you will surely drown’ in harmony with the Collector’s Edition. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(79) Replaced both occurrences of ‘Kai lord’ with ‘Kai Lord’. Replaced ‘enemies, eg Helghasts, in’ with ‘enemies (e.g. Helghast) in’. Added a period to the end of the illustration’s caption. Replaced ‘Durenese or’ with ‘Durenese, or’. Replaced ‘much preparation for’ with ‘much to prepare for’.

(80) Replaced ‘Seal, or’ with ‘Seal or’.

(82) Replaced ‘angry mob have’ with ‘angry mob has’.

(84) Replaced ‘leatherbound’ with ‘leather-bound’.

(86) Replaced ‘Westbank Wharf’ with ‘Eastbank Wharf’ since the geography clearly indicates that you are on the east bank of the River Dorn at this stage, since walking west from Section 86 to Section 194 leads to the jetty (cf. erratum for Section 37 regarding ‘East Bank Walk’).

(88) Moved the Camouflage choice into the first position.

(91) Replaced ‘cargo:’ with ‘cargo. (Remember that you must take the Backpack in order to carry any of the Backpack Items.)’. Replaced ‘two Items’ with ‘two items’. Replaced ‘above Items’ with ‘above items’. Replaced ‘Food’ with ‘food’. Added ‘(each Meal counts as one item of the merchant’s cargo)’.

(95) Moved the choice to heal the wounded man into the first position. Replaced ‘potion or some Laumspur, and’ with ‘potion, or some Laumspur and’.

(98) Replaced ‘Durenor forest’ with ‘Durenor Forest’.

(100) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Added a period to the end of the illustration’s caption.

(102) Moved the Tracking choice into the first position. Replaced ‘Hammerdal range’ with ‘Hammerdal Range’.

(103) Added ‘if you possess a Backpack. Otherwise you must consume it now or abandon it’ after ‘add this to your Action Chart’ based on a similar change in the Collector’s Edition.

(106) Added ‘(The Magic Spear is a weapon-like Special Item. Remember that you only get a Weaponskill bonus in this fight against the Helghast if you have Weaponskill with Spear.’ to the end of the second paragraph.

(113) Replaced ‘magician’s guild’ with ‘Magicians’ Guild’. Replaced ‘overboard, and’ with ‘overboard and’.

(118) Moved the Animal Kinship choice into the first position. Added a period to the end of the illustration’s caption. Replaced ‘Hammerdal range’ with ‘Hammerdal Range’.

(122) Replaced ‘Kai lord’ with ‘Kai Lord’. Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position. Replaced ‘Pick’ with ‘If not, pick’.

(123) Replaced ‘king’s’ with ‘King’s’.

(124) Replaced ‘Short Sword and’ with ‘Short Sword, and’.

(126) Replaced ‘Vonatar’ with ‘Vonotar’. Replaced ‘jail’ with ‘gaol’. Replaced ‘their left wrist’ with ‘their left wrists’.

(131) Replaced ‘If you have no Weapon, deduct’ with ‘Deduct’ since Lone Wolf has had no opportunity to acquire Weapons.

(132) Moved the paragraph about keeping the Magic Spear before the choices.

(134) Added a period to the end of the illustration’s caption.

(138) Replaced ‘Durenor forest’ with ‘Durenor Forest’.

(139) Replaced each occurrence of ‘Larnuma’ with ‘larnuma’.

(140) Replaced ‘well-known’ with ‘well known’.

(141) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(142) Added ‘(Mark the White Pass on your Action Chart as a Special Item.)’.

(144) Added a period to the end of the illustration’s caption. Replaced ‘nervously, then’ with ‘nervously, and then’.

(145) Added ‘(As the dry leaves merely helped purge the poison from your stomach, you do not regain any ENDURANCE points through consuming the Laumspur in this instance.)’ in harmony with the Collector’s Edition.

(146) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(148) Replaced ‘East Bank Walk’ with ‘West Bank Walk’ since you are west of the River Dorn at this stage, though not on its banks; nor does the street go to the river bank, as Section 323 strongly implies that it ends and becomes Lookout Street (cf. erratum for Section 86 regarding ‘Westbank Wharf’).

(150) Replaced ‘marshbird’ with ‘marsh-bird’. Replaced ‘Durenor forest’ with ‘Durenor Forest’. Added ‘(You are leaving the Wildlands and heading into the Durenor Forest and may once again use Hunting to hunt for food.)’.

(151) Replaced ‘succesful’ with ‘successful’.

(152) Replaced ‘warfleet’ with ‘war fleet’.

(160) Replaced ‘me my lord’ with ‘me, my lord’. Added ‘are carrying a Weapon and’.

(163) Replaced both occurrences of ‘said’ with ‘says’.

(164) Replaced ‘rockface’ with ‘rock-face’. Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position.

(166) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Added a period to the end of the illustration’s caption.

(168) Replaced ‘thieves and’ with ‘thieves, and’. Replaced ‘villagers, with’ with ‘villagers with’.

(169) Replaced ‘gaming house’ with ‘gaming-house’.

(173) Replaced ‘seen, and’ with ‘seen and’.

(176) Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position. Replaced ‘despatch’ with ‘dispatch’ in the illustration’s caption. Replaced ‘Hammerdal mountains’ with ‘Hammerdal Mountains’. Replaced ‘king’s’ with ‘King’s’. Added a period to the end of the illustration’s caption.

(181) Replaced ‘Useful Items’ with ‘useful items’. Replaced ‘above Items’ with ‘above items’.

(184) Replaced ‘Kai lord’ with ‘Kai Lord’.

(187) Replaced ‘following Items’ with ‘following items’.

(192) Replaced ‘sommersaults’ with ‘somersaults’.

(193) Replaced ‘ill-omen’ with ‘ill omen’.

(194) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘Weapons and’ with ‘Weapons, and’. Replaced ‘jetty, and’ with ‘jetty and’. Replaced ‘Westbank Wharf’ with ‘Eastbank Wharf’ since the geography clearly indicates that you are on the east bank of the River Dorn at this stage, since walking west from Section 86 to Section 194 leads to the jetty (cf. erratum for Section 37 regarding ‘East Bank Walk’).

(195) Replaced ‘Durncrag mountains’ with ‘Durncrag Mountains’.

(196) Added ‘(Remember to erase the Seal of Hammerdal from your Action Chart.)’.

(197) Replaced ‘equipment and’ with ‘equipment, and’.

(200) Added a period to the end of the illustration’s caption.

(202) Replaced ‘Lord-Lieutenant’ with ‘Lord-lieutenant’.

(203) Replaced ‘housemice’ with ‘house mice’.

(204) Replaced ‘magician’s guild’ with ‘Magicians’ Guild’.

(209) Replaced ‘king’s’ with ‘King’s’. Replaced ‘Lord-Lieutenant’ with ‘Lord-lieutenant’.

(213) Replaced ‘assasinates’ with ‘assassinates’.

(217) Replaced ‘says in a cynical voice.’ with ‘says in a cynical voice:’.

(218) Replaced ‘rope, and’ with ‘rope and’.

(220) Replaced ‘Durncrag range’ with ‘Durncrag Range’.

(222) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Added a period to the end of the illustration’s caption.

(223) There was a superfluous comma between ‘dreadful’ and ‘significance’ in the first paragraph.

(228) Replaced ‘distance to left and right’ with ‘distance to the east and west’. Replaced ‘Larnuma’ with ‘larnuma’. Replaced ‘go left’ with ‘head east’ and ‘go right’ with ‘head west’ (cf. Section 171).

(230) Replaced ‘women and’ with ‘women, and’.

(231) Moved the Tracking choice into the first position. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(232) Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position.

(234) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(237) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(238) Added a period to the end of the illustration’s caption. Replaced ‘Crowns or’ with ‘Crowns, or’. Added ‘(You only receive the free silver token once, regardless of how many times you may enter the gaming-house.)’ to the end of the second paragraph. Added ‘(do not erase them from your Action Chart)’ in harmony with the Collector’s Edition. Added ‘(Note that 0 sits between 9 and 1 in Cartwheel.)’ in harmony with the Collector’s Edition.

(241) ‘he’ has now been capitalized.

(242) Replaced ‘(eg’ with ‘(e.g.’. Replaced ‘they are determined to destroy you before you reach Durenor’ with ‘the Darklords are bent on thwarting your quest’, copied from Section 79.

(243) Replaced ‘Kai lord’ with ‘Kai Lord’. Replaced ‘sails and’ with ‘sails, and’.

(244) Moved the Tracking choice into the first position.

(246) Replaced ‘red pass’ with ‘Red Pass’. Replaced ‘white pass’ with ‘White Pass’.

(249) Added a period to the end of the illustration’s caption.

(250) Replaced ‘to try and’ with ‘to try to’.

(254) Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position.

(255) Replaced ‘weaponskill’ with ‘Weaponskill’.

(258) Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position.

(261) Replaced ‘person’ with ‘people’ to agree in number to the second choice.

(263) Replaced ‘your pass’ with ‘your Red Pass’. Added ‘(Mark the Red Pass on your Action Chart as a Special Item.)’. Replaced ‘watchtower and’ with ‘watchtower, and’.

(265) Replaced ‘warfleet’ with ‘war fleet’. Moved the Tracking choice into the first position. Replaced ‘forest of Durenor’ with ‘Forest of Durenor’.

(266) Replaced ‘Quarterstaffs’ with ‘Quarterstaves’. Replaced ‘The price of his weapons are’ with ‘The prices of his weapons are’.

(267) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(268) Replaced ‘Kai lord’ with ‘Kai Lord’. Added a period to the end of the illustration’s caption.

(274) Replaced ‘Crowns and’ with ‘Crowns, and’. Replaced ‘first floor’ with ‘first-floor’.

(276) It makes sense to restore your ENDURANCE points to the total you had before the match regardless of whether you win or lose. We changed this to be more clear. The original read:

If you lose, restore your ENDURANCE points to the same total that you had before the contest, and turn to 192.

(277) Replaced ‘staffbearer’ with ‘staff-bearer’.

(279) Replaced ‘Hammerdal mountains’ with ‘Hammerdal Mountains’.

(280) Replaced ‘equipment and’ with ‘equipment, and’.

(283) Replaced ‘above Items’ with ‘above items’.

(284) Added a period to the end of the illustration’s caption. Added ‘(You do not need to adjust your Action Chart.)’.

(287) Replaced ‘click’ with ‘click’.

(289) Replaced ‘Jala’ with ‘jala’. Replaced ‘seal’ with ‘Seal’.

(297) Replaced ‘door, and’ with ‘door and’.

(298) Replaced ‘If you do not have a Weapon, you’ with ‘You’ since Lone Wolf has had no opportunity to acquire Weapons.

(Section 299) The original edition of this book reads: ‘If you wish to give him your Magic Spear, so that he can defend the tunnel entrance, turn to 102. If you do not possess a Magic Spear, or do not wish to give it to Rhygar, turn to 118.’ Later editions came out reversing these two choices (i.e. the first choice leads to Section 118, the second choice to Section 102). Both of these versions are very problematic to game flow and inspired a controversy among the members of Project Aon. The version that you see in our text is a mixed scenario intended to most closely match the author’s surmised original intention, even though it does not appear in either previously published version.

If you wish to use either of the previously published versions, then refer to the appropriate choice as listed here. Discussion of the different versions follows:

Original version: The choices appear to serve no other purpose other than punishing Lone Wolf with certain death for mercifully handing Rhygar the Spear. The fact that this version was revised and the path that Lone Wolf is given in the Legends of Lone Wolf series also both appear to refute the correctness of this version.

Revised version: Under this version, it is impossible for Lone Wolf to succeed without taking the left path back at the beginning of the Durenor Forest (Section 150), ignoring the warning of the Szalls, and fighting the Helghast. This directly contradicts the statement in Kai Wisdom that a wise choice of Disciplines enables you to succeed regardless of your starting COMBAT SKILL and ENDURANCE scores.

Project Aon version: Although never previously published, this scenario allows Lone Wolf to succeed despite giving the Magic Spear to Rhygar.

Replaced ‘Hammerdal mountains’ with ‘Hammerdal Mountains’. Replaced ‘Hammerdal range’ with ‘Hammerdal Range’. Replaced ‘Spear, so’ with ‘Spear so’.

(300) Replaced ‘Wanlo’ with ‘wanlo’.

(301) Replaced ‘Daggers and’ with ‘Daggers, and’.

(302) Replaced ‘climb the watchtower stairs and quickly search the’ with ‘set about a quick search of these’ in harmony with the Collector’s Edition. Replaced ‘whatever Items’ with ‘whatever items’.

(305) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(306) Replaced ‘score reaches zero’ with ‘score reaches zero or below’. Replaced ‘points to zero’ with ‘points to zero or below’. Replaced ‘to try and’ with ‘to try to’.

(308) Replaced ‘Each dice’ with ‘Each die’.

(312) Replaced ‘rainswept’ with ‘rain-swept’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(313) Added ‘(Erase the Magic Spear from your Action Chart.)’.

(314) Replaced ‘at work when’ with ‘at work and’ as this is a direct quote of Captain Kelman’s words in Section 300. Moved the Hunting choice into the first position. Replaced ‘tomorrow.’ says’ with ‘tomorrow,’ says’. Added a period to the end of the illustration’s caption. Replaced ‘key and make’ with ‘key, and make’. Replaced ‘If you do not want to eat this food,’ with ‘If you do not want to eat this food, you must eat a Meal or lose 3 ENDURANCE points and’ in harmony with the Collector’s Edition. Replaced ‘The food smells most appetizing. You have not eaten today and now you must eat a Meal or lose 3 ENDURANCE points.’ with ‘You have not eaten today and the food smells most appetizing.’ in harmony with the Collector’s Edition.

(315) Moved the Mind Over Matter choice into the first position. Replaced ‘maps and’ with ‘maps, and’.

(321) Replaced ‘Kai lord’ with ‘Kai Lord’.

(323) Replaced ‘to start to’ with ‘and start to’.

(326) Added a period to the end of the illustration’s caption.

(328) Replaced ‘If you possess a Crystal Star Pendant, turn to 113’ with ‘If you have ever been given a Crystal Star Pendant, turn immediately to 113’ based in part on the Collector’s Edition. This makes it clear that the reader should take this path in preference to the Tracking path leading to Section 204.

(331) Replaced ‘Dagger and’ with ‘Dagger, and’. Replaced ‘these Items’ with ‘these items’.

(332) Added ‘This creature is immune to Mindblast.’ to the end of the final paragraph. Replaced ‘forest, and’ with ‘forest and’.

(333) Replaced ‘blood-stained’ with ‘bloodstained’.

(334) Moved the Tracking choice into the first position. Replaced ‘Durenor forest’ with ‘Durenor Forest’.

(336) Replaced ‘tokmor and’ with ‘tokmor, and’.

(337) Moved the Hunting choice into the first position. Replaced ‘Backpack and’ with ‘Backpack, and’. Replaced ‘Any weapons’ with ‘Any Weapons and Backpack Items’ based on a clarification made in Lone Wolf Club Newsletter No.2

(338) Added ‘erase the Magic Spear from your Action Chart and’.

(345) Replaced ‘jet black’ with ‘jet-black’.

(346) Replaced ‘Hunting cannot be used on your journey through the Wildlands’ with ‘Hunting cannot be used when instructed to eat a Meal on your journey through the Wildlands’.

(347) Replaced ‘leap on’ with ‘leap onto’.

(348) Replaced ‘door, and’ with ‘door and’.

(350) Replaced ‘Durncrag mountains’ with ‘Durncrag Mountains’. Replaced ‘air, continually’ with ‘air continually’. Added a period to the end of the illustration’s caption. Replaced ‘Lone Wolf’ with ‘Lone Wolf’ when referring to the series.

(Combat Rules Summary) Replaced ‘cross reference’ with ‘cross-reference’. Replaced ‘top of chart’ with ‘top of the chart’. ‘fall to 0’ with ‘falls to 0 or below’. Replaced ‘Pick number from’ with ‘Pick a number from the’. Replaced ‘Turn to Combat’ with ‘Turn to the Combat’. Replaced ‘to random number’ with ‘to the random number’. Replaced ‘when ENDURANCE’ with ‘when the ENDURANCE’. Replaced ‘ignored, only’ with ‘ignored; only’.

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