Errata
Introduction
We have taken our unique opportunity to correct errors and to enforce a standard of English usage. We list our changes here. If you see anything that needs correction, please contact the Project Aon Staff.
Errata List
(Title Page) Replaced ‘IN THE WORLD OF LONE WOLF A NEW HERO HAS ARISEN—GREY STAR THE WIZARD’ with ‘In the World of Lone Wolf a new hero has arisen—Grey Star the Wizard’. Replaced ‘Shadakine’ with ‘Shadaki’. Replaced ‘GREY STAR’ with ‘The World of Lone Wolf’.
(Of the Coming of Grey Star) Replaced ‘gods, the’ with ‘gods the’. Replaced ‘the Earth’ with ‘Magnamund’. Replaced ‘us Great’ with ‘us, Great’. Replaced ‘remain you’ with ‘remain, you’. Replaced ‘new found’ with ‘newfound’. Replaced ‘rule. And as’ with ‘rule. As’. Replaced ‘mists and’ with ‘mists, and’. Replaced ‘forests and’ with ‘forests, and’.
(The Story So Far) Replaced the second occurrence of ‘ ‘Shadow Gate’ ’ with ‘Shadow Gate’. Replaced ‘day no’ with ‘day, no’. Replaced ‘eyes, ‘The’ with ‘eyes. ‘The’.
(The Game Rules) Removed ‘at the front of this book. If you run out of space, you can copy out the chart or have it photocopied’. Removed ‘on the last page of this book’. Replaced ‘adventure and’ with ‘adventure, and’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘eg’ with ‘e.g.’. Replaced ‘fall to zero’ with ‘fall to zero or below’. Replaced ‘falls to zero’ with ‘falls to zero or below’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘Action Chart. (eg, if’ with ‘Action Chart. (e.g. if’. Replaced ‘of 14.) When’ with ‘of 14). When’.
(Magical Powers) Replaced each occurrence of ‘ie’ with ‘i.e.’. Replaced occurrences of ‘eg’ with ‘e.g.’. Replaced ‘alchemy’ with ‘Alchemy’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘prophecy’ with ‘Prophecy’. Replaced ‘fortell’ with ‘foretell’. Replaced ‘Chart..’ with ‘Chart.’. Replaced ‘quarterstaff yet’ with ‘quarterstaff, yet’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘magical powers’ with ‘Magical Powers’. Replaced ‘magical power’ with ‘Magical Power’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘five powers’ with ‘five Powers’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘power’ with ‘Power’, except in the description of the Wizard’s Staff. Replaced each occurrence of ‘lesser magicks’ with ‘Lesser Magicks’. Replaced ‘Eart and’ with ‘Earth, and’. Replaced ‘mind or’ with ‘mind, or’. Replaced ‘will be of use’ with ‘may be of use’.
(Equipment) Replaced ‘six’ with ‘eight’ according to a correction made in a Lone Wolf Club Newsletter. Replaced ‘sulphur’ with ‘Sulphur’. Replaced ‘saltpetre’ with ‘Saltpetre’. Replaced ‘vial’ with ‘Vial’ within the Herb Pouch contents list. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Item).’ with ‘Item)’. Replaced ‘notes but’ with ‘notes, but’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘your Belt Pouch’ with ‘the pocket of your robe’. Replaced ‘Shianti and’ with ‘Shianti, and’. Replaced ‘are, is’ with ‘are is’. Replaced ‘two weapons’ with ‘two Weapons’. Replaced ‘WILLPOWER or’ with ‘WILLPOWER, or’.
(Rules for Combat) Replaced ‘of chart’ with ‘of the chart’. Replaced ‘to random’ with ‘to the random’. Replaced ‘to 0’ with ‘0 or below’. Replaced ‘on the page after the Random Number Table’ with ‘in the back of this book’. Replaced ‘the one with the zero score’ with ‘that combatant’. Replaced ‘reduced to zero’ with ‘reduced to zero or below’. Replaced ‘points reduced’ with ‘points possibly reduced’. Replaced ‘multiply this by’ with ‘multiply the number listed for the enemy by’. Replaced ‘use, and have’ with ‘use and have’.
(Sage Advice) Removed ‘at the front of this book’. Replaced ‘score of zero WILLPOWER points’ with ‘WILLPOWER score of zero or below’. Replaced ‘all, so’ with ‘all; so’. Replaced ‘Grey Star adventures’ with ‘Grey Star adventures’ when referring to the series.
(1) Replaced ‘this power’ with ‘this Power’. Added a period to the end of the illustration’s caption. Replaced ‘or do’ with ‘or if you do’. Replaced ‘Kundi race that are’ with ‘Kundi race that is’.
(3) Replaced ‘road and, after’ with ‘road, and after’. Replaced ‘clearing, sheltered’ with ‘clearing sheltered’. Replaced ‘points. Your remaining 2 Meals must be given to Tanith and Shan.’ with ‘points, and 2 Meals (if you have any left) must be given to Tanith and Shan.’. Replaced ‘place but’ with ‘place, but’.
(4) Replaced ‘desperation you’ with ‘desperation, you’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘ onto’.
(6) Replaced ‘cliff face’ with ‘cliff-face’.
(8) Replaced ‘rough hewn’ with ‘rough-hewn’.
(10) Replaced ‘turn to 102’ with ‘turn to 90’. Section 90 was unreachable in the original and fits well in the context of the story here.
(13) Replaced ‘edge you’ with ‘edge, you’. Replaced ‘passed but’ with ‘passed, but’.
(14) Replaced ‘tomb and’ with ‘tomb, and’.
(15) Replaced ‘restore ENDURANCE’ with ‘restore your ENDURANCE’.
(16) Replaced ‘your Belt Pouch’ with ‘the pocket of your robe’.
(17) Replaced ‘Shenwu and’ with ‘Shenwu, and’. Replaced ‘minutes you’ with ‘minutes, you’. Replaced ‘victim and’ with ‘victim, and’. Replaced ‘head first’ with ‘head-first’.
(18) Replaced ‘I for one have’ with ‘I, for one, have’. Replaced ‘I too,’ with ‘I, too,’. Replaced ‘moving for’ with ‘moving, for’. Replaced ‘Tanith, ‘We’ with ‘Tanith, ‘we’. Replaced ‘ ‘He Who Serves No Master’ ’ with ‘ ‘He Who Serves No Master’ ’. Added ‘ and the Vial of Pink Liquid’ to the first choice, since Section 264 assumes that you possess both items. Replaced ‘leadership; a’ with ‘leadership: a’. Added a period to the end of the illustration’s caption.
(19) Replaced ‘continue your’ with ‘continue, your’. Replaced ‘Then finally’ with ‘Then, finally’. Replaced ‘these Items’ with ‘these items’. Replaced ‘Tinderbox and’ with ‘Tinderbox, and’. Replaced ‘or do’ with ‘or if you do’.
(20) Replaced ‘back and’ with ‘back, and’.
(21) Replaced ‘shortsword’ with ‘short sword’. Replaced ‘camp fire’ with ‘campfire’.
(22) Replaced ‘darkness and’ with ‘darkness, and’. Replaced ‘it and’ with ‘it, and’.
(23) Replaced ‘stairways both’ with ‘stairways—both’. Replaced ‘power of Prophecy’ with ‘Power of Prophecy’.
(24) Replaced ‘camp-fire’ with ‘campfire’.
(25) Replaced both occurrences of ‘ante-chamber’ with ‘antechamber’. Replaced ‘terrible glowing’ with ‘terrible, glowing’.
(27) Replaced ‘alley-way’ with ‘alleyway’.
(28) Replaced ‘bodies and unharmed you’ with ‘bodies, and unharmed, you’.
(29) Added a period to the end of the illustration’s caption.
(31) Replaced ‘ends and at first it’ with ‘ends, and at first, it’. Replaced ‘foaming white’ with ‘foaming, white’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘ onto’.
(32) Replaced ‘long range’ with ‘long-range’.
(33) Removed the first choice which read ‘If you have the Kazim Stone, turn to 51.’ since it does not fit into the context of the story, and it is partially redundant as Section 10 contains the same choice.
(34) Replaced ‘shadows you’ with ‘shadows, you’. Replaced ‘menacingly, ‘Slowly’ with ‘menacingly. ‘Slowly’. Replaced ‘or have’ with ‘or if you have’.
(35) Replaced ‘light you’ with ‘light, you’. Replaced ‘wind you’ with ‘wind, you’. Replaced ‘A cool breeze is coming from it, and freshens’ with ‘A cool breeze is coming from it, freshening’. Replaced ‘bones and’ with ‘bones, and’.
(36) Replaced ‘beautiful young’ with ‘beautiful, young’. Replaced ‘hair, all ragged and black, and’ with ‘hair—all ragged and black—and’.
(37) Replaced ‘jailer’s’ with ‘Gaoler’s’. Replaced ‘these Items’ with ‘these items’.
(38) Replaced ‘journey you’ with ‘journey, you’. Replaced ‘magic you’ with ‘magic, you’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘Alchemy you’ with ‘Alchemy, you’. Replaced ‘power of Alchemy’ with ‘Power of Alchemy’.
(39) Replaced ‘distance you’ with ‘distance, you’. Replaced ‘robes are’ with ‘robes, are’. Added a period to the end of the illustration’s caption. Replaced ‘hard-pressed, and have’ with ‘hard-pressed and have’.
(40) Replaced ‘street and’ with ‘street, and’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘alley-way’ with ‘alleyway’.
(42) Replaced ‘Masters, and’ with ‘Masters and’.
(43) Replaced ‘1 small vial of Laumspur’ with ‘Small Vial of Laumspur’. Replaced ‘1 Coil of Rope’ with ‘Coil of Rope’. Replaced ‘A Tinderbox’ with ‘Tinderbox’. Replaced ‘semi-circle’ with ‘semicircle’. Replaced ‘these Items’ with ‘these items’. Replaced ‘power of Prophecy’ with ‘Power of Prophecy’.
(44) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘ onto’.
(47) Replaced ‘Half-way’ with ‘Halfway’. Replaced ‘cry you’ with ‘cry, you’.
(49) Replaced ‘silver Charm’ with ‘Silver Charm’.
(50) Replaced ‘driver and as he draws closer you’ with ‘driver, and as he draws closer, you’.
(51) Replaced ‘Special Item’ with ‘Backpack Item’.
(52) Replaced ‘Azan river’ with ‘Azan River’.
(53) Replaced ‘power of Prophecy’ with ‘Power of Prophecy’. Replaced ‘who he then’ with ‘whom he then’.
(54) Replaced ‘power of Prophecy’ with ‘Power of Prophecy’.
(56) Replaced ‘you makes’ with ‘you make’.
(58) Replaced ‘Then after’ with ‘Then, after’. Replaced ‘Alchemy you’ with ‘Alchemy, you’. Replaced ‘points you’ with ‘points, you’. Replaced ‘power of Alchemy’ with ‘Power of Alchemy’.
(62) Replaced ‘matter of factly’ with ‘matter-of-factly’. Replaced ‘body, is dead.’ ’ with ‘body, ‘is dead.’ ’.
(64) Replaced ‘alley-ways’ with ‘alleyways’.
(65) Replaced ‘Salve of Yabari ointment’ with ‘Yabari Ointment’.
(66) Replaced ‘mercy; a’ with ‘mercy: a’.
(68) Replaced ‘came across’ with ‘come across’.
(72) Replaced ‘room, finally’ with ‘room. Finally’.
(73) Replaced ‘acid’ with ‘Acid’. Replaced ‘cautiously you’ with ‘cautiously, you’. Replaced ‘power of Prophecy’ with ‘Power of Prophecy’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(74) Replaced ‘weakly; ‘I’ with ‘weakly. ‘I’. Replaced ‘Shan, its’ with ‘Shan; it’s’.
(77) Replaced ‘ante-chamber’ with ‘antechamber’.
(81) Replaced ‘crossbowmen emitting’ with ‘crossbowmen, emitting’.
(82) Replaced ‘fishermen and’ with ‘fishermen, and’. Replaced ‘drunkards and’ with ‘drunkards, and’. Replaced ‘or would’ with ‘or if you would’.
(84) Replaced ‘desperation you’ with ‘desperation, you’.
(86) Replaced ‘out-distance’ with ‘outdistance’. Replaced ‘cliff face’ with ‘cliff-face’. Replaced ‘You repeat your prophecy to Shan and, taking his arm, you break into a trot’ with ‘Taking Shan’s arm, you break into a trot’ since it is possible to arrive here without having used the Power of Prophecy.
(87) Replaced ‘this Item as’ with ‘this Amulet as’. Replaced ‘fear throughout’ with ‘fear, throughout’. Replaced ‘floor: and’ with ‘floor, and’. Replaced ‘jailer’s’ with ‘Gaoler’s’. Replaced ‘power of Evocation’ with ‘Power of Evocation’. Replaced ‘this Item’ with ‘this item’. Added a period to the end of the illustration’s caption. Replaced ‘jailer’ with ‘gaoler’.
(88) Replaced ‘arches’ with ‘arcs’.
(90) Replaced ‘camp-fire’ with ‘campfire’. Replaced ‘power of Sorcery’ with ‘Power of Sorcery’.
(91) Replaced ‘Tinderbox you’ with ‘Tinderbox, you’.
(92) Replaced ‘power of Prophecy’ with ‘Power of Prophecy’. Replaced ‘this power’ with ‘this Power’.
(95) Replaced ‘this power’ with ‘this Power’. Replaced ‘or lack’ with ‘or if you lack’.
(96) Replaced ‘instant you’ with ‘instant, your’. Replaced ‘points and’ with ‘points, and’.
(98) Replaced ‘creature but’ with ‘creature, but’. Replaced ‘upwards and’ with ‘upwards, and’. In the second choice, replaced ‘If you have your Wizard’s Staff and wish to use it to cast a light’ with ‘If you would rather exert 1 WILLPOWER point to create a small glow from your Wizard’s Staff’ as in Section 19 since you will always have your Staff, but not necessarily the WILLPOWER to use it. Replaced ‘these Items’ with ‘these items’. Replaced ‘Tinderbox and’ with ‘Tinderbox, and’. Replaced ‘or do’ with ‘or if you do’.
(99) Replaced ‘5 Shadakine’ with ‘Shadakine’. Replaced ‘combat, and’ with ‘combat and’. Replaced ‘bridge, at’ with ‘bridge at’.
(100) Replaced ‘warriors and’ with ‘warriors, and’.
(101) Added a period to the end of the illustration’s caption.
(102) Replaced ‘fades, and’ with ‘fades and’. Replaced ‘eyeslits’ with ‘eye-slits’.
(103) Replaced ‘Mantiz the’ with ‘Mantiz, the’.
(105) Replaced ‘power of Prophecy, and’ with ‘Power of Prophecy and’. Added a period to the end of the illustration’s caption. Replaced ‘merchant and’ with ‘merchant, and’ in the illustration’s caption.
(108) Replaced ‘low and’ with ‘low, and’. Replaced ‘straighter you’ with ‘straighter, you’.
(109) Replaced ‘right you’ with ‘right, you’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘jailer’ with ‘gaoler’.
(110) Replaced ‘lost.’ with ‘lost,’.
(112) Put semicolons between the items in the list of overheard conversation and changed ‘Dreams.’ ‘Save’ to ‘Dreams. Save’. Replaced ‘warriors, and’ with ‘warriors and’.
(113) Replaced both occurrences of ‘cliff face’ with ‘cliff-face’. Replaced ‘outstretched hand’ with ‘outstretched hand,’.
(114) Replaced ‘power of Prophecy’ with ‘Power of Prophecy’.
(116) Replaced ‘Sorcery,turn to 226’ with ‘Sorcery, turn to 226’.
(117) Replaced ‘war cries’ with ‘war-cries’. Replaced ‘fury the’ with ‘fury, the’. Replaced ‘staff and’ with ‘staff, and’. Replaced ‘despatch’ with ‘dispatch’.
(118) Replaced ‘below and’ with ‘below, and’.
(119) Replaced ‘tighten, then’ with ‘tighten, and then’. Replaced ‘suddenly, wilt’ with ‘suddenly wilt’.
(122) Replaced ‘care you’ with ‘care, you’. Replaced ‘minutes the’ with ‘minutes, the’.
(123) Replaced ‘eyeslits’ with ‘eye-slits’.
(124) Replaced each occurrence of ‘jailer’ with ‘gaoler’. Replaced ‘Jailer’ with ‘Gaoler’.
(125) Replaced ‘jailer’s’ with ‘gaoler’s’. Replaced ‘open and’ with ‘open, and’. Replaced ‘the Keys’ with ‘the Gaoler’s Keys’.
(127) Replaced ‘excited mob roar their’ with ‘excited mob roars its’.
(128) Replaced ‘Calacena mushrooms, and’ with ‘Calacena Mushrooms, and’. Replaced ‘this power’ with ‘this Power’. Replaced ‘or do’ with ‘or if you do’.
(129) Replaced ‘Shan, ‘She’ with ‘Shan. ‘She’. Replaced ‘ante-chamber’ with ‘antechamber’.
(131) Replaced ‘Shadakine empire’ with ‘Shadakine Empire’.
(132) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘crossbowman and’ with ‘crossbowman, and’.
(133) Replaced ‘Cut-Throat’ with ‘Cut-throat’. Replaced ‘death, and’ with ‘death and’.
(136) Replaced ‘lightly, and’ with ‘lightly and’. Replaced ‘danger,turn to 345’ with ‘danger, turn to 345’. Replaced ‘this power’ with ‘this Power’. Replaced ‘or would’ with ‘or if you would’.
(137) Replaced ‘stairs, which’ with ‘stairs which’.
(138) Replaced ‘cliff face’ with ‘cliff-face’.
(139) Replaced ‘far sinister’ with ‘far more sinister’. Replaced ‘eyeslits’ with ‘eye-slits’.
(140) Replaced ‘sail-ships’ with ‘sail ships’. Added a period to the end of the illustration’s caption.
(142) Replaced ‘jailer’s’ with ‘Gaoler’s’.
(143) Replaced ‘this power’ with ‘this Power’.
(144) Replaced ‘escape and, as’ with ‘escape, and as’.
(145) Replaced ‘long range attack’ with ‘long-range attack’.
(146) Replaced ‘floor, entrances’ with ‘floor—entrances’. Replaced ‘the undergrowth’ with ‘the undergrowth,’.
(148) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘ onto’.
(149) Replaced ‘screams, ‘a’ with ‘screams. ‘A’ and added to the choice text ‘ or have defeated the Kleasá within three rounds’.
(150) Replaced ‘prys’ with ‘pries’. Replaced ‘zero, or lower’ with ‘zero or below’ and reversed the order of the choices. Replaced ‘above zero or’ with ‘above zero, or’.
(151) Replaced ‘sulphur’ with ‘Sulphur’. Replaced ‘saltpetre’ with ‘Saltpetre’. Replaced ‘crystals’ with ‘Crystals’. Replaced ‘different power’ with ‘different Power’.
(152) Replaced ‘open and’ with ‘open, and’.
(153) Replaced ‘power of Sorcery’ with ‘Power of Sorcery’. Replaced ‘this power or’ with ‘this Power, or if you’.
(157) Replaced ‘this power’ with ‘this Power’.
(158) Replaced ‘pain, due’ with ‘pain due’. Replaced ‘pounds and’ with ‘pounds, and’.
(159) Replaced ‘power of Sorcery’ with ‘Power of Sorcery’. Replaced ‘power of Alchemy’ with ‘Power of Alchemy’.
(161) Replaced ‘A Silver Ring’ with ‘Silver Charm’. Replaced ‘A Broadsword’ with ‘Broadsword (Weapon)’. Replaced ‘2 potions of Laumspur’ with ‘2 Potions of Laumspur’. Replaced ‘A coil of Rope’ with ‘Coil of Rope’. Replaced ‘power of Alchemy’ with ‘Power of Alchemy’. Replaced ‘backpacks and’ with ‘backpacks, and’.
(164) Removed the parentheses. Replaced ‘Azan river’ with ‘Azan River’.
(165) Replaced ‘creature you’ with ‘creature, you’. Replaced ‘zero or less’ with ‘zero or below’.
(167) Replaced ‘you,’ ’ with ‘you!’ ’.
(168) Replaced ‘west and’ with ‘west, and’.
(169) Replaced ‘crossbowman, who’ with ‘crossbowman who’.
(170) Replaced ‘acid’ with ‘Acid’.
(171) Replaced ‘these Items’ with ‘these items’.
(172) Replaced ‘these powers’ with ‘these Powers’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘power’ with ‘Power’.
(175) Replaced ‘power young’ with ‘power, young’. Replaced ‘willpower’ with ‘WILLPOWER’. Added a period to the end of the illustration’s caption.
(176) Replaced ‘jailer’s’ with ‘Gaoler’s’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(178) Replaced ‘or would’ with ‘or if you would’.
(181) Replaced ‘elemental plane’ with ‘Elemental Plane’.
(183) Removed the line of periods from the first item. Replaced ‘1 jar of Ezeran crystals’ with ‘1 Jar of Ezeran Crystals’. Replaced ‘with sulphur)’ with ‘with sulphur).’. Replaced ‘A Pestle and Mortar’ with ‘Pestle and Mortar’. Replaced ‘1 bottle of Naptha’ with ‘1 Bottle of Naphtha’. Replaced ‘1 vial of Graveweed essence’ with ‘1 Vial of Graveweed Essence’. Replaced ‘1 vial of Alether’ with ‘1 Vial of Alether’. Replaced ‘1 bundle of dried Azawood leaves’ with ‘1 Bundle of dried Azawood Leaves’. Replaced ‘seeds’ with ‘Seeds’. Replaced ‘these Items’ with ‘these items’. Replaced ‘MADAM TARLAS—HERBAL CURES & REMEDIES’ with ‘Madam Tarlas—Herbal Cures & Remedies’. Replaced ‘APOTHECARY TO NOBLEMEN & KINGS’ with ‘Apothecary to Noblemen & Kings’.
(184) Replaced ‘cliff face’ with ‘cliff-face’.
(186) Replaced ‘away hoping’ with ‘away, hoping’.
(187) Replaced ‘tortuous’ with ‘tortured’. Replaced ‘visited’ with ‘been arrested at’. Replaced ‘Jailer’ with ‘Gaoler’.
(189) Replaced ‘can not’ with ‘cannot’.
(190) Replaced ‘way Grey’ with ‘way, Grey’. Replaced ‘north, and’ with ‘north and’. Replaced ‘south, and’ with ‘south and’. Removed ‘at the front of the book’.
(191) Changed the second choice to lead to Section 314 instead of Section 150 and the third choice to lead to Section 288 instead of Section 320. These sections were unreachable in the original and make much more sense in the context of the story. Replaced ‘astral plane, and’ with ‘Astral Plane and’.
(193) Replaced ‘A Pestle and Mortar’ with ‘Pestle and Mortar (Backpack Item)’. Replaced ‘A packet of Ezeran crystals’ with ‘Packet of Ezeran Crystals’. Replaced ‘1 jar of Yabari ointment’ with ‘Jar of Yabari Ointment’. Replaced ‘seeds’ with ‘Seeds’. Replaced ‘the Items’ with ‘the items’.
(194) Replaced ‘waist, with’ with ‘waist with’. Replaced ‘closer and’ with ‘closer, and’. Replaced ‘Shan but, overwhelmed’ with ‘Shan, but overwhelmed’.
(195) Replaced ‘street, which’ with ‘street which’. Replaced ‘sign, which reads.:’ with ‘sign which reads:’. Replaced ‘INN OF THE LAUGHING MOON’ with ‘Inn of the Laughing Moon’.
(197) Added a period to the end of the illustration’s caption.
(199) Replaced each occurrence of ‘power’ with ‘Power’.
(200) Replaced all instances of ‘alley-ways’ with ‘alleyways’. Added the following choice: ‘If you have the Magical Power of Prophecy and wish to use it, turn to 64.’ This is to parallel Section 40.
(201) Replaced ‘your powers’ with ‘your Powers’.
(202) Replaced ‘eyes and with your hands raised you’ with ‘eyes, and with your hands raised, you’. Replaced ‘elemental plane’ with ‘Elemental Plane’.
(204) Replaced ‘leg, the’ with ‘leg; the’.
(206) Replaced ‘fungi enables’ with ‘fungi enable’.
(207) Replaced ‘light and’ with ‘light, and’. Replaced ‘enemies, who’ with ‘enemies who’.
(208) Replaced ‘crossbowmen with your Wizard’s Staff, at long range,’ with ‘crossbowmen at long range with your Wizard’s Staff,’.
(209) Replaced ‘vial of Pink Liquid’ with ‘Vial of Pink Liquid’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Items’ with ‘items’.
(211) Replaced ‘Evocation or wish’ with ‘Evocation, or if you wish’.
(213) Replaced ‘length you’ with ‘length, you’.
(214) Replaced ‘breath’ with ‘breathe’. Replaced ‘power of Prophecy’ with ‘Power of Prophecy’. Replaced ‘jailer’ with ‘gaoler’.
(215) Replaced ‘fight but’ with ‘fight, but’. Replaced ‘1 potion of Randalim’s Elixir’ with ‘Potion of Rendalim’s Elixir’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘herb warden’ with ‘herbwarden’. Replaced ‘A Pestle’ with ‘Pestle’. Replaced ‘3 Tarama flower seeds’ with ‘3 Tarama Seeds’. Replaced ‘Sealed pouch of Calacena mushrooms’ with ‘Sealed pouch of Calacena Mushrooms’. Replaced ‘power of Enchantment’ with ‘Power of Enchantment’. Replaced ‘the Items’ with ‘the items’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘ onto’.
(216) Replaced ‘barbs, plunging’ with ‘barbs plunging’.
(217) Replaced ‘It it’s’ with ‘If it’s’. Replaced ‘table. ‘they’re’ with ‘table. ‘They’re’. Replaced ‘narrow and’ with ‘narrow, and’.
(218) Replaced ‘well and’ with ‘well, and’. Replaced ‘Village’ with ‘village’.
(221) Replaced ‘ante-chamber’ with ‘antechamber’. Replaced ‘intones and’ with ‘intones, and’. Replaced ‘mark it as a Special Item’ with ‘mark this Backpack Item’. Replaced ‘wall and’ with ‘wall, and’. Replaced ‘compartment, roughly’ with ‘compartment roughly’. Replaced ‘stone, and’ with ‘stone and’.
(223) Replaced ‘alley-way’ with ‘alleyway’. Replaced ‘gutters and’ with ‘gutters, and’.
(224) Added a period to the end of the illustration’s caption.
(225) Replaced ‘half-way’ with ‘halfway’. Replaced ‘closer and’ with ‘closer, and’.
(229) Replaced ‘wish, at long range, to attack’ with ‘wish to launch a long-range attack on’.
(230) Replaced ‘back and’ with ‘back, and’.
(231) Replaced ‘toes and’ with ‘toes, and’. Replaced ‘long-range’ with ‘long range’.
(232) Replaced ‘bloody you’ with ‘bloody, you’. Replaced ‘you and’ with ‘you, and’. Replaced ‘defer’ with ‘deter’.
(233) Added a period to the end of the illustration’s caption.
(236) In the last sentence of the first paragraph, replaced the comma with ellipsis and followed the sentence with ellipsis.
(238) Replaced ‘another, then’ with ‘another; then’.
(239) Replaced ‘staff’ with ‘Staff’. Replaced ‘true and’ with ‘true, and’.
(241) Added a period to the end of the illustration’s caption.
(243) Replaced ‘Jailor’ with ‘Gaoler’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘jailer’ with ‘gaoler’. Replaced ‘jailer’s’ with ‘gaoler’s’. Replaced ‘jailer’s Keys’ with ‘Gaoler’s Keys’.
(245) Replaced ‘reply; ’we’ with ‘reply. ‘We’. Replaced ‘bargain and’ with ‘bargain, and’. Replaced ‘says confidently’ with ‘says, confidently’.
(247) Replaced ‘continue ‘In’ with ‘continue. ‘In’.
(249) Replaced ‘amazement you’ with ‘amazement, you’. Replaced ‘gulleys’ with ‘gullies’. Replaced ‘top, and’ with ‘top and’. Replaced ‘steep, and’ with ‘steep and’. Replaced ‘Shan, who’ with ‘Shan who’.
(250) Replaced ‘strange pale’ with ‘strange, pale’.
(251) Replaced ‘least, that’ with ‘least that’. Replaced ‘street, leading’ with ‘street leading’.
(252) Replaced ‘value and’ with ‘value, and’. Replaced ‘picks and’ with ‘picks, and’.
(253) Replaced ‘half-way’ with ‘halfway’.
(254) Replaced ‘eye you’ with ‘eye, you’. Replaced ‘plants and’ with ‘plants, and’.
(255) Replaced ‘unharmed and’ with ‘unharmed, and’. Replaced ‘skid, and’ with ‘skid and’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘ onto’.
(256) Replaced ‘air, we’re’ with ‘air; we’re’. Replaced ‘close, that’ with ‘close that’. Replaced ‘say; ‘judging’ with ‘say, ‘judging’. Replaced ‘seconds you’ with ‘seconds, you’. Changed the choice which led to Section 306 to lead to Section 107 instead. The original book led the reader to an inappropriate instant death section. This may not be the most elegant way to correct this problem, but it seems to be the best compromise. Replaced ‘Quoku, as’ with ‘Quoku as’.
(259) Replaced ‘feet and’ with ‘feet, and’. Replaced ‘Magri and’ with ‘Magri, and’. Replaced ‘sweet, a’ with ‘sweet—a’.
(260) Replaced ‘chase and’ with ‘chase, and’. Replaced ‘fearful creature’ with ‘fearsome creature’.
(261) Replaced ‘pounding and’ with ‘pounding, and’. Replaced ‘back and’ with ‘back, and’.
(263) Replaced ‘veins and’ with ‘veins, and’. Replaced ‘leg and’ with ‘leg, and’. Replaced ‘clearing, surrounded’ with ‘clearing surrounded’.
(264) Replaced ‘contents you’ with ‘contents, you’. Replaced ‘trepidation you’ with ‘trepidation, you’. Replaced ‘Special Item’ with ‘Backpack Item’ (to be consistent with Section 209).
(265) Replaced ‘power and’ with ‘power, and’.
(266) Replaced ‘shoulder’ with ‘shoulders’. Replaced ‘speed; a’ with ‘speed: a’. Changed the second choice which led to Section 333 to lead to Section 330 instead. Added a period to the end of the illustration’s caption.
(269) Replaced ‘you and’ with ‘you, and’. Replaced ‘tongue, curled’ with ‘tongue curled’.
(271) Replaced ‘you and’ with ‘you, and’. Replaced ‘elemental plane’ with ‘Elemental Plane’.
(272) Replaced ‘legs and’ with ‘legs, and’. Replaced ‘you intrusion’ with ‘your intrusion’. Replaced ‘pell mell’ with ‘pell-mell’. Replaced ‘If the combat lasts longer than three rounds turn to’ with ‘If the combat enters a fourth round, do not continue with the combat but turn immediately to’.
(276) Replaced ‘lifted and’ with ‘lifted, and’. Replaced ‘last agonized’ with ‘last, agonized’. Replaced ‘erupts and in a blinding flash both’ with ‘erupts, and in a blinding flash, both’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘ onto’.
(278) Replaced ‘power of Prophecy’ with ‘Power of Prophecy’.
(280) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(281) Replaced ‘air, and’ with ‘air and’. Replaced ‘is still more than 10’ with ‘is still 10 or more’.
(282) Replaced ‘hand and’ with ‘hand, and’.
(283) Replaced ‘breath’ with ‘breathe’. Replaced ‘subsides and’ with ‘subsides, and’.
(284) Replaced ‘tunnel you’ with ‘tunnel, you’. Replaced ‘outnumbered and’ with ‘outnumbered, and’.
(286) Replaced ‘is is’ with ‘is’. Replaced ‘power of Psychomancy’ with ‘Power of Psychomancy’. Replaced ‘6 or’ with ‘6, or’. Replaced ‘7 or’ with ‘7, or’.
(287) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(289) Replaced ‘Shazarak’ with ‘Shasarak’. Replaced ‘more than 15’ with ‘15 or more’.
(291) Replaced ‘time discovering’ with ‘time, discovering’. Replaced ‘Mountains and’ with ‘Mountains, and’. Replaced ‘man, who’ with ‘man who’. Replaced ‘Belt Pouch’ with ‘Herb Pouch’. Replaced ‘Lara, of’ with ‘Lara: of’. Replaced ‘joking. But’ with ‘joking; but’. Replaced ‘eyes, that’ with ‘eyes that’. Replaced ‘any Items’ with ‘any items’.
(292) Added a period to the end of the illustration’s caption.
(293) Replaced ‘waterfall to’ with ‘waterfall, to’. Replaced ‘lake, towards’ with ‘lake towards’.
(294) Replaced ‘man trailing’ with ‘man, trailing’. Replaced ‘greater than 10’ with ‘10 or more’.
(295) Replaced ‘struggle and’ with ‘struggle, and’. Replaced ‘mind, ‘There’ with ‘mind. ‘There’. Replaced ‘tensed and’ with ‘tensed, and’. Replaced ‘on and’ with ‘on, and’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘ onto’.
(296) Replaced ‘long winding’ with ‘long, winding’. Replaced ‘atttack’ with ‘attack’.
(297) Replaced ‘acid’ with ‘Acid’. Replaced ‘However you’ with ‘However, you ’. Replaced ‘sulphur and saltpetre’ with ‘Sulphur and Saltpetre’. Replaced ‘fire, which’ with ‘fire which’. Replaced ‘potion and’ with ‘potion, and’. Replaced ‘as Items’ with ‘as items’.
(298) Replaced ‘chance you’ with ‘chance, you’. Replaced ‘run you’ with ‘run, you’.
(299) Replaced ‘more she’ with ‘more, she’. Replaced ‘apart and’ with ‘apart, and’.
(300) Replaced ‘Correction, where despite’ with ‘Correction where, despite’. Replaced ‘ante-chamber’ with ‘antechamber’. Replaced ‘you and’ with ‘you, and’.
(301) Replaced ‘dream, in’ with ‘dream in’.
(302) Replaced ‘pause he’ with ‘pause, he’.
(304) Replaced ‘tendril that threaten’ with ‘tendril that threatens’.
(305) Replaced ‘however freely’ with ‘however, freely’. Replaced ‘Goodbye Grey Star and’ with ‘Goodbye, Grey Star, and’. Replaced ‘return to 172, and’ with ‘return to 172 and’. Replaced ‘another power’ with ‘another Power’.
(306) Replaced ‘away and’ with ‘away, and’.
(307) Replaced ‘chance you’ with ‘chance, you’. Replaced ‘you and’ with ‘you, and’.
(308) Replaced ‘staff’ with ‘Staff’.
(309) Replaced ‘challenge you’ with ‘challenge, you’.
(310) Replaced ‘time and’ with ‘time, and’. Replaced ‘single handed’ with ‘single-handed’.
(311) Replaced ‘shoulders pressing’ with ‘shoulders, pressing’. Replaced ‘acid but, it’ with ‘acid, but it’. Replaced ‘ante-chamber’ with ‘antechamber’. Replaced ‘Shadakine, who’ with ‘Shadakine who’. Replaced ‘from you and’ with ‘from you, and’.
(312) Replaced ‘Correction and’ with ‘Correction, and’.
(313) Replaced ‘Your power’ with ‘Your Power’.
(315) Replaced ‘Staff. But’ with ‘Staff, but’. Replaced ‘ground and, screaming’ with ‘ground, and screaming’.
(316) Replaced ‘scream for’ with ‘scream, for’. Replaced ‘water you’ with ‘water, you’. Replaced ‘escape, you’ with ‘escape. You’.
(318) Replaced ‘seconds you’ with ‘seconds, you’. Replaced ‘weakens and’ with ‘weakens, and’.
(320) Replaced ‘exhaused’ with ‘exhausted’.
(321) Replaced ‘jailer’s’ with ‘gaoler’s’. Replaced ‘Jailer’ with ‘Gaoler’. Replaced ‘stairs, by’ with ‘stairs by’.
(322) Replaced ‘heels and’ with ‘heels, and’.
(323) Replaced ‘surprise is’ with ‘surprise, is’. Replaced ‘want is’ with ‘want, is’. Replaced ‘this you’ with ‘this, you’. Replaced ‘Stone, at’ with ‘Stone at’. Replaced ‘Stone, which’ with ‘Stone which’.
(325) Replaced ‘lime stone’ with ‘limestone’. Replaced ‘towers with their tall, ragged peaks, cast’ with ‘towers—with their tall, ragged peaks—cast’. Replaced ‘old rusty’ with ‘old, rusty’. Replaced ‘again, over’ with ‘again over’. Replaced ‘right and’ with ‘right, and’.
(327) Replaced ‘plain but’ with ‘plain, but’.
(328) Replaced ‘sun you’ with ‘sun, you’.
(330) Replaced ‘rock face’ with ‘rock-face’.
(331) Replaced ‘ground. But’ with ‘ground, but’. Replaced ‘underbelly, which’ with ‘underbelly which’.
(332) Replaced ‘you and’ with ‘you, and’. Replaced ‘stumble, and half diving, half falling, roll’ with ‘stumble and—half diving, half falling—roll’. Added ‘2 or more WILLPOWER points with which to use’ to the first choice. You will always have your Staff, but not necessarily the WILLPOWER to use it.
(335) Replaced ‘friend and’ with ‘friend, and’.
(338) Replaced ‘corridor and’ with ‘corridor, and’. Replaced ‘power of Prophecy’ with ‘Power of Prophecy’.
(339) Replaced ‘voice.’ with ‘voice,’.
(340) Replaced ‘ahead intent’ with ‘ahead, intent’. Replaced ‘them and’ with ‘them, and’. Replaced ‘beyond. But’ with ‘beyond; but’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(341) Replaced ‘slow and’ with ‘slow, and’. Replaced ‘cliff face’ with ‘cliff-face’.
(342) Replaced ‘razor sharp’ with ‘razor-sharp’. Replaced ‘wounds and’ with ‘wounds, and’.
(344) Added a period to the end of the illustration’s caption.
(345) Replaced ‘happens. But’ with ‘happens, but’.
(346) Replaced ‘mist and’ with ‘mist, and’. Replaced ‘Shazarak’ with ‘Shasarak’.
(347) Replaced ‘light, which’ with ‘light which’. Replaced ‘light, and’ with ‘light and’. Replaced ‘grow’ with ‘draw’.
(350) Replaced ‘agility, and flushing’ with ‘agility, flushing’. Replaced ‘unceremoniously, outside’ with ‘unceremoniously outside’. Replaced ‘things I think,’ with ‘things, I think,’. Replaced ‘Tribe has’ with ‘Tribe, has’. Replaced ‘bells and his’ with ‘bells, and his’. Replaced ‘here and you’ with ‘here, and you’. Replaced ‘teeth and’ with ‘teeth, and’. Replaced ‘ ‘riddle of the Shianti‘ ’ with ‘ ‘riddle of the Shianti’ ’. Replaced ‘rhyme it’ with ‘rhyme, it’. Replaced ‘king agrees’ with ‘king, agrees’. Replaced ‘nursey’ with ‘nursery’. Replaced ‘series.’ with ‘series:’ and added the name of the next book. Replaced ‘the Way of the Shianti’ with ‘The Way of the Shianti’. Added a period to the end of each of the illustration’s captions.
(Map) Added label ‘Dagorlan’ to the nameless village in harmony with recent maps of Magnamund.
(Combat Rules Summary) Added a fourth step ‘Pick a number from the Random Number Table.’ in the first step list. Replaced ‘cross reference’ with ‘cross-reference’. Replaced ‘Turn to Combat’ with ‘Turn to the Combat’.
