Errata

Introduction

We have taken our unique opportunity to correct errors and to enforce a standard of English usage. We list our changes here. If you see anything that needs correction, please contact the Project Aon Staff.

Errata List

(Title Page) Replaced ‘THE WORLD OF LONE WOLF’ with ‘The World of Lone Wolf’. Replaced ‘climax to your epic struggle’ with ‘climax of your epic struggle’.

(Of the Coming of Grey Star) Replaced ‘new found’ with ‘newfound’. Replaced ‘the Earth’ with ‘Magnamund’. Replaced ‘mists and’ with ‘mists, and’. Replaced ‘forests and’ with ‘forests, and’.

(The Story So Far … ) Replaced ‘did not’ with ‘did not stay’. Replaced ‘the Gate’ with ‘the Shadow Gate’.

(The Game Rules) Replaced each occurrence of ‘eg’ with ‘e.g.’. Removed ‘ at the front of this book’. Removed ‘ If you run out of space, you can copy out the chart or have it photocopied.’. Removed ‘ on the last page of this book’. Replaced ‘to zero’ with ‘to zero or below’. Replaced ‘Grey Star’ with ‘Grey Star’ when referring to the series. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(Magical Powers) Replaced ‘ie’ with ‘i.e.’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘eg’ with ‘e.g.’. Replaced ‘quarterstaff yet’ with ‘quarterstaff, yet’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘lesser magicks’ with ‘Lesser Magicks’. Replaced ‘magical powers’ with ‘Magical Powers’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘higher magicks’ with ‘Higher Magicks’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘physiurgy’ with ‘Physiurgy’. Replaced ‘This power allows’ with ‘This Power allows’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘choose this power’ with ‘choose this Power’. Replaced ‘power of Enchantment’ with ‘Power of Enchantment’. Replaced ‘power of elemental magic’ with ‘Power of elemental magic’. Replaced ‘power of Alchemy’ with ‘Power of Alchemy’. Replaced ‘use of alchemy’ with ‘use of Alchemy’. Replaced ‘power of Alchemy’ with ‘Power of Alchemy’. Replaced ‘power of prophecy’ with ‘Power of Prophecy’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘power of divination’ with ‘Power of Prophecy’. Replaced ‘This power bestows’ with ‘This Power bestows’. Replaced ‘this power permits’ with ‘this Power permits’. Replaced ‘power of Thaumaturgy’ with ‘Power of Thaumaturgy’. Replaced ‘Telergy is the power’ with ‘Telergy is the Power’. Replaced ‘resist this power’ with ‘resist this Power’. Replaced ‘power of Theurgy’ with ‘Power of Theurgy’. Replaced ‘power of a visionary’ with ‘Power of a Visionary’. Replaced ‘Earth and’ with ‘Earth, and’. Replaced ‘telepathy and’ with ‘telepathy, and’. Replaced ‘storms and’ with ‘storms, and’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Grey Star’ with ‘Grey Star’ when referring to the series. Replaced ‘mind or’ with ‘mind, or’. Replaced ‘Elemental plane’ with ‘Elemental Plane’.

(Equipment) Replaced ‘sulphur’ with ‘Sulphur’. Replaced ‘saltpetre’ with ‘Saltpetre’. Replaced ‘vial’ with ‘Vial’ within the Herb Pouch contents list. Replaced ‘notes but’ with ‘notes, but’. Replaced ‘Shianti and’ with ‘Shianti, and’. Added ‘Mark these 4 items in your Action Chart.’ after the Alchemy equipment list, as in the other books. Removed ‘ at the beginning of this book’. Replaced ‘Alchemy’ with ‘Alchemy or Theurgy’. Replaced ‘It counts as 1 item’ with ‘It counts as one item’. Replaced ‘Grey Star’ with ‘Grey Star’ when referring to the series. Replaced ‘two weapons’ with ‘two Weapons’.

(Rules for Combat) Removed ‘ on the inside back cover of the book’. Replaced ‘on the page after the Random Number Table’ with ‘in the back of this book’. Replaced ‘the one with the zero score’ with ‘that combatant’. Replaced ‘reduced to zero’ with ‘reduced to zero or below’. Replaced ‘points reduced’ with ‘points possibly reduced’. Replaced ‘multiply this by’ with ‘multiply the number listed for the enemy by’. Replaced ‘use, and have’ with ‘use and have’.

(Sage Advice) Replaced ‘higher and lesser magicks’ with ‘Higher and Lesser Magicks’. Replaced ‘choose the powers’ with ‘choose the Powers’. Replaced ‘confrton’ with ‘confront’.

(1) Added closing quote characters after the second and third paragraphs. Replaced ‘excitement. the’ with ‘excitement. The’. Replaced ‘Sena and’ with ‘Sena, and’. Replaced ‘you, and’ with ‘you and’. Replaced ‘himself, and’ with ‘himself and’.

(2) Replaced ‘life force’ with ‘life-force’. Replaced ‘failed, your’ with ‘failed; your’.

(3) Replaced ‘turn them’ with ‘turn it’.

(5) Replaced ‘If you possess 3 WILLPOWER points, and wish to fill the Moonstone with your power and hurl it against the wall’ with ‘If you possess 3 WILLPOWER points, and wish to fill the Moonstone with your power and hurl its power against the wall’ as the original wording made it sound as though the option was to throw the Moonstone rather than its power.

(6) Replaced ‘satety’ with ‘safety’.

(7) Replaced ‘river Dosar’ with ‘River Dosar’.

(8) Replaced ‘empty vial’ with ‘empty Vial’.

(9) Replaced each occurrence of ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘have versed’ with ‘are versed’. Moved the two first choices to the two last positions. Replaced ‘Sorcery, and’ with ‘Sorcery and’. Replaced ‘Telergy, and’ with ‘Telergy and’.

(10) Replaced each occurrence of ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘Theurgey’ with ‘Theurgy’. Replaced ‘these powers’ with ‘these Powers’. Replaced ‘or do’ with ‘or if you do’.

(11) Replaced each occurrence of ‘Phinomel pods’ with ‘Phinomel Pods’.

(12) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘Dimension door’ with ‘Dimension Door’. Replaced ‘Thaumaturgy, deduct’ with ‘Thaumaturgy, you may deduct’. Replaced ‘Moonstone, deduct’ with ‘Moonstone, you may deduct’. Replaced ‘Freedom guild’ with ‘Freedom Guild’. Replaced ‘means, then you’ with ‘means, you’. Replaced ‘Temeris potion’ with ‘Temeris Potion’. Replaced ‘spell, and’ with ‘spell and’. Replaced ‘teleport, and’ with ‘teleport and’.

(13) Replaced ‘Staff, before’ with ‘Staff before’.

(15) Replaced ‘mid-day’ with ‘midday’. Replaced ‘birdge’ with ‘bridge’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘wish to ask’ with ‘wish to use the Power of Theurgy and ask’.

(16) Replaced each occurrence of ‘Phinomel pods’ with ‘Phinomel Pods’.

(18) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘these powers’ with ‘these Powers’. Replaced ‘Dolani or do’ with ‘Dolani, or if you do’. Replaced ‘Thaumaturgy, and’ with ‘Thaumaturgy and’. Replaced ‘Sorcery, and’ with ‘Sorcery and’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’. Replaced ‘Physiurgy, and’ with ‘Physiurgy and’.

(19) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘these powers’ with ‘these Powers’. Replaced ‘delete 4 WILLPOWER points’ with ‘deduct 4 WILLPOWER points’. Replaced ‘hills of Tilos’ with ‘Hills of Tilos’. Replaced ‘or do’ with ‘or if you do’.

(20) Replaced ‘life-less’ with ‘lifeless’.

(21) Replaced ‘life force’ with ‘life-force’.

(23) Replaced ‘Dolani river’ with ‘Dolani River’. Replaced ‘north east’ with ‘northeast’. Replaced ‘launch long-range’ with ‘launch a long-range’. Replaced ‘lake Dolani’ with ‘Lake Dolani’.

(24) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘this power’ with ‘this Power’. Replaced ‘these powers’ with ‘these Powers’. Replaced ‘Thaumaturgy, and’ with ‘Thaumaturgy and’. Replaced ‘or do’ with ‘or if you do’.

(25) Replaced ‘1 coil of Rope’ with ‘Coil of Rope’. Replaced ‘1 Sword and Sheath’ with ‘Sword and Sheath’. Replaced ‘1 Spear’ with ‘Spear’. Replaced ‘1 Dagger and Sheath’ with ‘Dagger and Sheath’. Replaced ‘1 Water Bottle’ with ‘Water Bottle’. Replaced ‘1 Tinder box’ with ‘Tinderbox’. Replaced ‘1 Torch counts as 1 Backpack Item’ with ‘each Torch counts as one Backpack Item’.

(28) Replaced ‘evade combat turn’ with ‘evade combat, turn’.

(29) Replaced ‘1 Backpack’ with ‘Backpack’. Replaced ‘1 Coil of Rope’ with ‘Coil of Rope’. Replaced ‘1 Water Bottle’ with ‘Water Bottle’. Replaced ‘1 Tinderbox’ with ‘Tinderbox’. Replaced ‘1 Sword’ with ‘Sword’. Replaced ‘1 Masbaté Battle Horn’ with ‘Masbaté Battle Horn’. Replaced ‘high magick of Necromancy’ with ‘Higher Magick of Necromancy’.

(30) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(32) Replaced ‘half-way’ with ‘halfway’.

(33) Replaced ‘pear’ with ‘spear’.

(34) Replaced ‘you. they’ with ‘you. They’. Replaced ‘a pestle and mortar’ with ‘a Pestle and Mortar’. Replaced ‘empty vial’ with ‘empty Vial’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘saltpetre’ with ‘Saltpetre’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘sulphur’ with ‘Sulphur’. Replaced ‘The empty vials’ with ‘The empty Vials’. Replaced ‘Zakutsk flower’ with ‘Zakutsk Flower’. Replaced ‘Demeril root’ with ‘Demeril Root’. Replaced ‘Pestle and Mortar are Backpack Items’ with ‘Pestle and Mortar and the Tinderbox are Backpack Items,’. Replaced ‘the vials’ with ‘the Vials’. Replaced ‘wil’ with ‘will’. Replaced ‘1 Pestle and Mortar’ with ‘Pestle and Mortar’. Replaced ‘1 Tinderbox’ with ‘Tinderbox’. Replaced ‘together, then’ with ‘together, and then’.

(36) Replaced ‘neither you nor Tanith have’ with ‘neither you nor Tanith has’.

(38) Replaced ‘feet away. The home’ with ‘feet away. ‘The home’. Replaced ‘persectuion’ with ‘persecution’. Replaced ‘dematerilize’ with ‘dematerialize’. Replaced ‘warior’ with ‘warrior’. Replaced ‘mightly’ with ‘mighty’. Replaced ‘Ho there Dioka!’ with ‘Ho there, Dioka!’.

(39) Replaced ‘Demon Lord, Agarash’ with ‘Demonlord Agarash’. Replaced ‘If you wish’ with ‘If you have 1 WILLPOWER point and wish’. Replaced ‘sightless and’ with ‘sightless, and’. Replaced ‘NEVER!’ with ‘Never!’.

(40) Replaced ‘Phinomel pods’ with ‘Phinomel Pods’.

(41) Replaced ‘the speed of your reactions and the fierceness of your gaze paralyses’ with ‘the speed of your reactions and the fierceness of your gaze paralyse’.

(42) Replaced ‘ceatures’ with ‘creatures’. Replaced ‘despatching’ with ‘dispatching’.

(43) Replaced ‘surrrounds’ with ‘surrounds’. Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘this power’ with ‘this Power’. Replaced ‘these powers’ with ‘these Powers’. Replaced ‘Shadakine empire’ with ‘Shadakine Empire’. Replaced ‘Prophecy, and’ with ‘Prophecy and’. Replaced ‘Visionary, and’ with ‘Visionary and’. Replaced ‘or do’ with ‘or if you do’.

(47) Replaced ‘half-way’ with ‘halfway’. Replaced ‘Agarash’s’ with ‘Agarashi’s’. Replaced ‘hills of Tilos’ with ‘Hills of Tilos’.

(49) Replaced ‘a Special Item, which may’ with ‘an item on your Action Chart. It may’. Replaced ‘or your Herb Pouch’ with ‘or in your Herb Pouch’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘empty vials’ with ‘empty Vials’.

(50) Replaced ‘Intinctively’ with ‘Instinctively’. Replaced ‘this power’ with ‘this Power’. Replaced ‘Prophecy, and’ with ‘Prophecy and’. Replaced ‘or do’ with ‘or if you do’.

(57) Made the last sentence a paragraph of its own.

(58) Replaced ‘your power’ with ‘your Power’. Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Moved the third choice up to the first position. Replaced ‘Visionary, and’ with ‘Visionary and’. Replaced ‘suffer, and’ with ‘suffer and’.

(60) Replaced ‘Neither you nor Tanith have’ with ‘Neither you nor Tanith has’.

(67) Replaced ‘stone. and’ with ‘stone, and’. Replaced ‘wierd’ with ‘weird’. Replaced ‘toadbeasts’ with ‘toad beasts’. Replaced ‘this power’ with ‘this Power’.

(68) Replaced ‘jubliant’ with ‘jubilant’.

(69) Replaced ‘incandesence’ with ‘incandescence’.

(70) Replaced ‘south east’ with ‘southeast’. Replaced ‘north west’ with ‘northwest’.

(76) Replaced ‘north west’ with ‘northwest’. Replaced ‘potion of Invulnerability, and’ with ‘Potion of Invulnerability and’.

(79) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’. Replaced ‘or do’ with ‘or if you do’.

(81) Replaced ‘Neromancy, and’ with ‘Necromancy and’. Replaced ‘Prophecy, and’ with ‘Prophecy and’. Replaced ‘Visionary, and’ with ‘Visionary and’.

(82) Replaced ‘reptillian’ with ‘reptilian’.

(84) Replaced ‘empty vial’ with ‘empty Vial’.

(86) Replaced each occurrence of ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Added a fourth choice ‘If you do not possess any of the above Powers, you must attack the bridge with your Staff; turn to 175.’ (cf. Section 280). Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’. Replaced ‘Physiurgy, and’ with ‘Physiurgy and’. Replaced ‘Thaumaturgy, and’ with ‘Thaumaturgy and’.

(88) Replaced ‘If you wish to fire at the remaining Flying Snake with your Staff at long range, and have 2 WILLPOWER points’ with ‘If you have 2 WILLPOWER points and wish to fire at the remaining Flying Snake with your Staff at long range’.

(91) Replaced ‘strenghtening’ with ‘strengthening’. Replaced ‘waves of sorcery’ with ‘waves of Sorcery’. Replaced ‘it’s clawed hand’ with ‘its clawed hand’. Replaced ‘vile hunched figure’ with ‘vile, hunched figure’.

(92) Replaced ‘fight, Shasarak, tell me that?’ with ‘fight, Shasarak? Tell me that!’. Replaced ‘Shasarak, and’ with ‘Shasarak and’.

(93) Replaced ‘materialzed’ with ‘materialized’. Replaced ‘falter, then’ with ‘falter, and then’.

(95) Replaced ‘rock or’ with ‘rock, or’.

(97) Replaced ‘semi-circle’ with ‘semicircle’. Replaced ‘beasts, others’ with ‘beasts; others’. Replaced ‘fire, with’ with ‘fire with’.

(98) Replaced ‘or have’ with ‘or if you have’.

(99) Replaced ‘fast flowing’ with ‘fast-flowing’. Replaced ‘north east’ with ‘northeast’.

(103) Replaced ‘while, then’ with ‘while, and then’.

(104) Replaced ‘crowd of demons are’ with ‘crowd of demons is’. Replaced ‘The demon pack forms a large circle around you and stand’ with ‘The demon pack forms a large circle around you and they stand’.

(107) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(108) Replaced ‘enchantment’ with ‘Enchantment’.

(111) Replaced ‘forward, then’ with ‘forward, and then’.

(113) Replaced ‘magical Power’ with ‘Magical Power’. Replaced ‘long range’ with ‘long-range’.

(115) Replaced each occurrence of ‘powers’ with ‘Powers’. Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’. Replaced ‘or wish’ with ‘or if you wish’.

(121) Replaced ‘obscenely, others’ with ‘obscenely; others’.

(123) Replaced ‘first round’ with ‘second round’.

(124) Replaced ‘Elemental plane’ with ‘Elemental Plane’. Replaced ‘large, clay’ with ‘large clay’.

(125) Replaced ‘life forces’ with ‘life-forces’.

(128) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘ onto’.

(129) Replaced ‘life force’ with ‘life-force’. Replaced ‘arch enemy’ with ‘arch-enemy’. Replaced ‘Come … we’ with ‘Come … We’.

(132) Replaced ‘the head of’ with ‘the heads of’.

(134) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(135) Replaced ‘balustraded gallerys’ with ‘balustraded galleries’.

(137) Replaced ‘group of demons are’ with ‘group of demons is’. Moved the illustration that was located in this Section to Section 139, as the event it depicts is described there. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(139) Replaced ‘The horde stop’ with ‘The horde stops’. Moved the illustration that was located in Section 137 here, as the event it depicts is described here. Replaced the illustration caption ‘You hurl a cascading rain of magical fire on to the head of the demonic horde below.’ with ‘Your heart misses a beat as a huge pair of monstrous eyes appear within the flames of the portal.’ Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘pair of monstrous eyes appears’ with ‘pair of monstrous eyes appear’ in both the section and the illustration’s caption.

(141) Replaced ‘large, reptilian’ with ‘large reptilian’.

(142) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘these powers’ with ‘these Powers’. Replaced ‘them or’ with ‘them, or’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘hills of Tilos’ with ‘Hills of Tilos’. Replaced ‘Visionary, and’ with ‘Visionary and’. Replaced ‘Prophecy, and’ with ‘Prophecy and’.

(147) Replaced ‘half-way’ with ‘halfway’. Replaced ‘small, black’ with ‘small black’.

(153) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘large pair of eyes appears’ with ‘large pair of eyes appear’. Replaced ‘sweeps up the side of the shallow valley in their hundreds and attacks’ with ‘sweep up the side of the shallow valley in their hundreds and attack’.

(154) Replaced ‘battle cry’ with ‘battle-cry’. Replaced ‘death blow’ with ‘death-blow’.

(158) Replaced ‘points, and wish’ with ‘points and wish’.

(159) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘these powers’ with ‘these Powers’. Replaced ‘Sorcery, and’ with ‘Sorcery and’. Replaced ‘Thaumaturgy, and’ with ‘Thaumaturgy and’. Replaced ‘or do’ with ‘or if you do’.

(161) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’.

(162) Replaced ‘power of Prophecy’ with ‘Power of Prophecy’.

(165) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘Astral plane’ with ‘Astral Plane’.

(167) Replaced each occurrence of ‘Demon lord’ with ‘Demonlord’. Replaced ‘Agarash, and’ with ‘Agarash and’. Replaced ‘Moonstone, and’ with ‘Moonstone and’.

(170) Replaced ‘the demon horde are’ with ‘the demon horde is’. Replaced ‘half-way’ with ‘halfway’. Replaced ‘out-rider’ with ‘outrider’. Replaced ‘power of Sorcery’ with ‘Power of Sorcery’. Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘Gem, and’ with ‘Gem and’. Replaced ‘Telergy, and’ with ‘Telergy and’. Replaced ‘Enchantment, and’ with ‘Enchantment and’.

(172) Replaced ‘retatively’ with ‘relatively’. Replaced ‘she cries ‘Something’ with ‘she cries. ‘Something’. Replaced ‘moving at speed’ with ‘moving at great speed’.

(175) Replaced ‘lack. (ie 2’ with ‘lack (i.e. 2’.

(176) Replaced ‘Demon lord’ with ‘Demonlord’.

(177) Replaced ‘hop and’ with ‘hop, and’. Replaced ‘Necromancy, and’ with ‘Necromancy and’.

(178) Replaced ‘hills of Tilos’ with ‘Hills of Tilos’.

(180) Replaced ‘death blow’ with ‘death-blow’. Replaced ‘points and’ with ‘points, and’. Replaced ‘If you possess 3 WILLPOWER points, and wish to fill the Moonstone with your power and hurl it against the wall’ with ‘If you possess 3 WILLPOWER points, and wish to fill the Moonstone with your power and hurl its power against the wall’ as the original wording made it sound as though the option was to throw the Moonstone rather than its power.

(181) Replaced ‘power of Physiurgy’ with ‘Power of Physiurgy’. Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’.

(182) Replaced ‘hills of Tilos’ with ‘Hills of Tilos’.

(184) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’.

(186) Replaced ‘Unsuspecting the’ with ‘Unsuspecting, the’ in the illustration’s caption.

(187) Replaced ‘blows and’ with ‘blows, and’.

(190) Replaced ‘pain, then’ with ‘pain, and then’.

(191) Replaced ‘for, indeed, I hate you’ with ‘for indeed I hate you’. Replaced ‘breathes, ‘I’ with ‘breathes. ‘I’. Replaced ‘represent; the’ with ‘represent: the’. Replaced ‘eyes; colourless’ with ‘eyes, colourless’. Replaced ‘feeling; like’ with ‘feeling, like’. Replaced ‘powerful, I am’ with ‘powerful; I am’.

(192) Replaced ‘failed, your’ with ‘failed; your’.

(193) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(194) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘these powers’ with ‘these Powers’. Replaced ‘Sorcery, and’ with ‘Sorcery and’. Replaced ‘Thaumaturgy, and’ with ‘Thaumaturgy and’. Replaced ‘or do’ with ‘or if you do’.

(195) Replaced ‘By the Gods’ with ‘By the gods’.

(196) Replaced ‘power of Sorcery’ with ‘Power of Sorcery’. Replaced ‘forcefield’ with ‘force field’.

(198) Replaced ‘eyeblink’ with ‘eye-blink’.

(199) Replaced ‘past, then’ with ‘past, and then’.

(200) Replaced ‘column reach’ with ‘column reaches’. Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘Necromancy, and’ with ‘Necromancy and’.

(201) Replaced ‘you ashore. I am’ with ‘you ashore. ‘I am’. Replaced ‘host of Masbaté warriors wait’ with ‘host of Masbaté warriors waits’. Replaced ‘fleet-footed wariors’ with ‘fleet-footed warriors’. Replaced ‘shore’, he’ with ‘shore,’ he’.

(202) Replaced ‘half-way’ with ‘halfway’.

(203) Replaced ‘this power’ with ‘this Power’.

(204) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘protection, and’ with ‘protection and’. Replaced ‘or have’ with ‘or if you have’.

(207) Replaced ‘blood and’ with ‘blood, and’.

(208) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘these powers’ with ‘these Powers’. Replaced ‘Magical Power of Thaumaturgy, and’ with ‘Higher Magick of Thaumaturgy and’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’. Replaced ‘Physiurgy, and’ with ‘Physiurgy and’. Replaced ‘or wish’ with ‘or if you wish’.

(212) Replaced ‘If you wish to fire a long-range attack with your Wizard’s Staff at the leading demon in the formation, and you have 2 WILLPOWER points’ with ‘If you have 2 WILLPOWER points and wish to fire a long-range attack with your Wizard’s Staff at the leading demon in the formation’.

(213) Replaced ‘look-out’ with ‘lookout’. Replaced ‘north east’ with ‘northeast’.

(214) Replaced ‘hills of Tilos’ with ‘Hills of Tilos’.

(215) Replaced ‘range, with’ with ‘range with’.

(216) Replaced ‘pupiless’ with ‘pupilless’.

(217) Replaced ‘power of Telergy’ with ‘Power of Telergy’. Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’.

(218) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘or have’ with ‘or if you have’.

(220) Replaced ‘enery’ with ‘energy’.

(221) Replaced ‘plunge into’ with ‘plunges into’.

(224) Replaced ‘hills of Tilos’ with ‘Hills of Tilos’.

(225) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘these powers’ with ‘these Powers’. Replaced ‘Prophecy, and’ with ‘Prophecy and’. Replaced ‘Thaumaturgy, and’ with ‘Thaumaturgy and’. Replaced ‘or do’ with ‘or if you do’.

(227) Replaced ‘Necromancy, and’ with ‘Necromancy and’.

(229) Replaced ‘Half-way’ with ‘Halfway’.

(230) Replaced ‘Pin-points’ with ‘Pinpoints’.

(233) Replaced ‘half-way’ with ‘halfway’. Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’.

(234) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘these powers’ with ‘these Powers’. Replaced ‘or are’ with ‘or if you are’.

(236) Replaced ‘bloodcurdling’ with ‘blood-curdling’.

(237) Replaced each occurrence of ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘power of Necromancy’ with ‘Power of Necromancy’. Replaced ‘power as a Visionary’ with ‘Power as a Visionary’. Replaced ‘these powers’ with ‘these Powers’. Replaced ‘hills of Tilos’ with ‘Hills of Tilos’. Replaced ‘Visionary, and’ with ‘Visionary and’. Replaced ‘Prophecy, and’ with ‘Prophecy and’.

(241) Replaced ‘a formulae’ with ‘a formula’.

(242) Replaced ‘gasp, Beyond’ with ‘gasp. Beyond’.

(246) Replaced ‘hills of Tilos’ with ‘Hills of Tilos’.

(248) Replaced each occurrence of ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(254) Replaced ‘Kazim; the’ with ‘Kazim, the’.

(255) Replaced ‘sorcery’ with ‘Sorcery’.

(258) Replaced ‘hills of Tilos’ with ‘Hills of Tilos’.

(260) Replaced ‘Daziarn plain’ with ‘Daziarn Plane’.

(261) Replaced ‘If you wish to release a long-range attack at the Flying Snake, and have 2 WILLPOWER points’ with ‘If you have 2 WILLPOWER points and wish to release a long-range attack at the Flying Snake’.

(265) Replaced ‘turn to 206’ with ‘do not continue the combat but turn immediately to 206’.

(268) Replaced ‘miles lies’ with ‘miles lie’. Replaced ‘Tilos hills’ with ‘Tilos Hills’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘The howling pack springs forward’ with ‘The howling pack spring forward’.

(270) Replaced ‘turn to 276’ with ‘do not continue the combat but turn immediately to 276’. Replaced ‘rounds, and’ with ‘rounds and’.

(271) Replaced ‘crawling writhing mass’ with ‘crawling, writhing mass’.

(274) Replaced ‘or do’ with ‘or if you do’.

(277) Replaced ‘If you wish to release a long-range attack at the Flying Snake, and have 2 WILLPOWER points’ with ‘If you have 2 WILLPOWER points and wish to release a long-range attack at the Flying Snake’.

(279) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘Invulnerability, and’ with ‘Invulnerability and’.

(280) Replaced each occurrence of ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘the above powers’ with ‘the above Powers’. Changed the last choice to lead to Section 175 instead of Section 59, as Section 59 does not fit into the context of the story here, and there are no other ways to reach Section 175. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’. Replaced ‘Physiurgy, and’ with ‘Physiurgy and’. Replaced ‘Thaumaturgy, and’ with ‘Thaumaturgy and’.

(282) Replaced ‘crosed’ with ‘crossed’. Replaced ‘reinforcments’ with ‘reinforcements’. Replaced ‘haggard and’ with ‘haggard face and’.

(284) Replaced ‘demons and’ with ‘demons, and’.

(287) Replaced ‘realise’ with ‘realize’. Replaced ‘forward, then’ with ‘forward, and then’.

(289) Replaced ‘this power’ with ‘this Power’. Replaced ‘sharp and’ with ‘sharp, and’. Replaced ‘elemental plane’ with ‘Elemental Plane’.

(291) Replaced ‘shield of sorcery’ with ‘Shield of Sorcery’.

(293) Replaced ‘battle cry’ with ‘battle-cry’. Replaced ‘the horde begin’ with ‘the horde begins’.

(294) Replaced ‘backpack’ with ‘Backpack’. Replaced ‘empty vial’ with ‘empty Vial’.

(295) Replaced ‘again, otherwise’ with ‘again; otherwise’. Replaced ‘energy, then’ with ‘energy, and then’. Replaced ‘crack’ with ‘crack’.

(298) Replaced ‘magical powers’ with ‘Magical Powers’. Replaced ‘new-found’ with ‘newfound’. Replaced ‘for ever’ with ‘forever’. Replaced ‘hills of Tilos’ with ‘Hills of Tilos’.

(299) Replaced ‘feet lies’ with ‘feet lie’.

(300) Replaced ‘newly risen’ with ‘newly-risen’.

(302) Replaced ‘ememy’ with ‘enemy’. Replaced ‘If the combat lasts for’ with ‘If you win the combat in’.

(304) Replaced ‘Turn 235’ with ‘Turn to 235’.

(309) Replaced ‘zig-zag’ with ‘zigzag’.

(310) Replaced ‘chest and’ with ‘chest, and’. Replaced ‘let go, will not let go, as’ with ‘let go—will not let go—as’.

(312) Replaced ‘guildsmen’ with ‘Guildsmen’. Replaced ‘trail east’ with ‘trail west’. Replaced ‘forest of Fernmost’ with ‘Forest of Fernmost’.

(316) Replaced ‘cannot . .’ with ‘cannot … ’. Replaced ‘demon lord’ with ‘Demonlord’.

(317) Replaced ‘fomation’ with ‘formation’. Replaced ‘Combat last’ with ‘Combat lasts’.

(318) Replaced ‘combined WILLPOWER and ENDURANCE point totals’ with ‘combined WILLPOWER and ENDURANCE point total’.

(320) Replaced ‘kock’ with ‘knock’.

(321) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘north east’ with ‘northeast’. Replaced ‘Visionary, and’ with ‘Visionary and’.

(322) Replaced ‘demon lord’ with ‘Demonlord’.

(324) Replaced ‘war horn’ with ‘war-horn’.

(325) Replaced ‘If you wish to fire a long-range attack at the chariot, and have 2 WILLPOWER points’ with ‘If you have 2 WILLPOWER points and wish to fire a long-range attack at the chariot’.

(327) Replaced ‘forest of Fernmost’ with ‘Forest of Fernmost’.

(328) Replaced ‘Shadkine Army’ with ‘Shadakine Army’. Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘almost fail but’ with ‘almost fail, but’. Replaced ‘Shadakine, fades’ with ‘Shadakine fades’.

(331) Replaced ‘six items’ with ‘eight items’. Replaced ‘Tamara Seeds’ with ‘Tarama Seeds’, as in Grey Star the Wizard. Replaced ‘Phinomel pods’ with ‘Phinomel Pods’.

(332) Replaced ‘tree-tops’ with ‘treetops’.

(336) Replaced ‘will hold up to six items may be stored’ with ‘can hold up to eight items, and any other potions may be stored’. Replaced ‘Tamara Seeds’ with ‘Tarama Seeds’, as in Grey Star the Wizard. Replaced ‘Phinomel pods’ with ‘Phinomel Pods’.

(337) Replaced ‘hail of arrows that fly’ with ‘hail of arrows that flies’. Replaced ‘melée’ with ‘mêlée’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Moved the first choice into the last position. Replaced ‘you Grey Star’ with ‘you, Grey Star’. Replaced ‘Physiurgy, and’ with ‘Physiurgy and’. Replaced ‘Telergy, and’ with ‘Telergy and’.

(338) Replaced ‘elemental plane’ with ‘Elemental Plane’.

(340) Replaced ‘forboding’ with ‘foreboding’.

(343) Replaced ‘superstitous’ with ‘superstitious’.

(345) Replaced ‘arch enemy’ with ‘arch-enemy’.

(347) Replaced ‘beleagured’ with ‘beleaguered’. Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’. Replaced ‘Physiurgy, and’ with ‘Physiurgy and’. Replaced ‘or do’ with ‘or if you do’.

(348) Removed ‘ at the beginning of the book’. Replaced ‘north-western’ with ‘northwestern’. Replaced ‘these once-great people’ with ‘this once-great people’.

(350) Replaced ‘demon lord’ with ‘Demonlord’.

(352) Replaced ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Replaced ‘Thaumaturgy, and’ with ‘Thaumaturgy and’.

(353) Replaced each occurrence of ‘higher magick’ with ‘Higher Magick’. Added a fourth choice ‘If you do not possess any of the above Powers, you must attack the bridge with your Staff; turn to 175.’ (cf. Section 280). Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’. Replaced ‘Physiurgy, and’ with ‘Physiurgy and’. Replaced ‘Thaumaturgy, and’ with ‘Thaumaturgy and’.

(355) Replaced ‘Phinomel pods’ with ‘Phinomel Pods’.

(360) Added a link to the Passing of the Shianti epilogue. Replaced ‘The demon lord, Agarash’ with ‘The Demonlord Agarash’. Replaced ‘comers’ with ‘corners’.

(The Passing of the Shianti) Replaced ‘artifacts’ with ‘artefacts’. Replaced ‘as many foretold they would’ with ‘as many foretold they would be’. Replaced ‘a magiocracy’ with ‘a Magiocracy’.

(Combat Rules Summary) Added a fourth step ‘Pick a number from the Random Number Table.’ in the first step list. Replaced ‘Turn to Combat Results Table’ with ‘Turn to the Combat Results Table’. Replaced ‘cross reference’ with ‘cross-reference’.

(Map) Added label ‘Dagorlan’ to the nameless village in harmony with recent maps of Magnamund.